Good story so far, can't wait for the rest.

You may want to amend the end of this chapter, because Dawn's underage and therefore cannot be legally questioned by anyone without a parent or legal guardian, which is Buffy, present.

This has been a wonderful story so far. Can't wait to see more.

Interesting story

Dude! Where's my car?

Cute chapter. Looking forward to more.

awesome

That was funny but its chapter 11 and buffy still hasn't fought a dinosaur.

Oh lordy, can imagine drunken Spike and a seething Xander getting cabin fever before long, that and Angel asking about the car LOL, and Cordy with her usual concern and caring attitude.

very good

Very nice meet there, and just cool moment of small talk and getting to know one another, as well as it appearing to be a Sonya who's not the greed head she's made out to be at times, and would like to connect with her sisters children.

Well, never thought of Ethan popping in like he did, but with all the chaos being caused by the dinos, it'd be perfect for him, and with Glory on the way as well, makes me wonder if the island might end up sinking into the ocean.

The first meeting of Buffy and "Paul" should be interesting. Actually kind of hope the JP people actually get to see it.

very good

Love the story so far, just a shame the chapters are getting so short :(

This has the potential to be really good. I actually hope that was foreshaowing Glory get into a fight with a T-rex, raptor, or an allosaurus if you work in Site B (JP II).

interesting filler, wonders what happens next, byes