I really hope you're continuing this story! I've really loved it so far! :D

ooo, i am now curiously waiting for damien to seduce manuel!

This is a pretty cute story, and I'll be interested to see where you go with it. There are a lot of things to explore at Iris Academy, and magic is full of exciting possibilities. Your tone is nice, and you've embroidered the story in interesting ways. Please continue.

i like your snake rooomate!

"rule she could brake" if you're updating might want to fix the spelling there!

ALSQERHJHFL;JHSJ;GSODLK please please please continue this

aaaah i think i just died a little

I haven't seen any good Grabiner fanfic other than this one and another.

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Please continue it. ;_;

dude I'll even sing a song of your choice for you

omg

please continue a;sdflgksjn;dvhkj

Yay! We have a category now! (I saw the post on the forums and pretty much 'ran' here.) This feels like a really good story. I like it. The only grammar/spelling problems I can find are where it sounds the same as the word you meant to use, but they have different meanings. I forget what that's called. For instance, in the third paragraph, "...the newest rule she could brake, the cheep thrills..." 'brake' should be 'break' and 'cheep' should be 'cheap.' Truthfully, I didn't even notice that until I reread the story, so you're fine. Good luck with the contest!