Had to come back to this one to finish later-beyond intense. Now! (ahem) It's your duty to link these snippets together in a longer story, and deliver Tony from some of this torment...!

Thank you! I knew you could create something for Ann, even with the few glimpses of her that the show gave you. And you touched on my favorite aspect of her, gleaned from those little bits-her relationship with Tony. You have made my week! Feel free to continue feeding this long-starved Tunnel addiction...

Fascinating. You always come up with unique situations, and find words to express such wrenching emotional intensity. I love the inclusion of our future General Kirk! Hope you'll write Ann in one of these days...I always wanted her to be treated better than she was.

It's a major treat when I find you've written again.

OK, this was moody to the point of being a bit creepy - more suited to Halloween than Valentine's Day! That's not to say I didn't love it - I did. It reminded me a bit of some of Ray Bradbury's more introspective shorts.

What a wonderful idea to give Woody a star turn - he's so often overlooked. I do love the whole Cassandra reference, and since canon already has a Troy-centered episode, there's no use keeping her in reserve for a starring role down the road. (Although she would make a good story - much better than the one they used.)

There are some great stories that could be told, mythology alone is full of them, but very few that suit your distinctive style. Your choices of events reflect the same care you give your writing; the two meld perfectly. Follow your instincts. They're good ones.

Beautiful story and I can see where this could have happened. You've got a wonderful talent.

(I'm glad I checked this fandom to see if there was anything new. I saw your note (and thanks!). As far as ideas go, I am going to put some thought into it. I like your 'disaster' stories - they are very poignant (the MS River flooding, e.g.). I also had thought about some things that happened after the show aired, but a lot of the fun was them using their vast knowledge to figure out where they are and navigate out. Another thought might be them stuck in a no-win situation where they figure it's all over (thinking like a Butch/Sundance scenario) - as they begin to fight their way out, they are rescued.)

Thanks for your stories!

Love the prequel scenes-and glimpses of "complex life" details. Just how extensive was that underground world? And what if they got back to the present, but for some reason(s) had to go back into the tunnel? Hmmm...

You have a genuine gift. I may not comment often, but I'm a devoted fan, and am always struck by your ability to create and maintain mood. You've infused this with a sense of gentle melancholy that touches all the right notes. Beatifully done.

Powerful, plausible ending. But only ONE of such, so you must keep writing.

Wow.

Just read chaps 2 & 3; very nice historical pieces adapted for the show. I can visualize both clearly thanks to your writing. Also liked the historical info at the end. Love the Tony/Doug rapport. Very typical of the show.

This one was a heart-ripper-but with a hopeful ending. Your best so far. Keep 'em coming, please.

Beautifully written first chapter. I'm hooked and look forward to reading the rest.

(I hadn't checked this fandom in a while, so I'm glad I checked reviews on the Streets side and found you. I love Time Tunnel - and James Darren is awesome!)

Such a treat when I find you're at it again. Please keep on.

I love these chapters, the moments of possibility, but they gut me. Every time. I always look forward to what you'll bring next time.

Very good! I had no idea what was going on until the end. Please keep on.