I really liked it... am definatly looking for your completion! I was so engrossed/intrigued by your storyline that I hadn't realized that it wasnt finished...so frustrating yet dually a complement to you as writer!

I am fairly critical, but I think you have maintained some key elements, as far as the show is concerned. I strongly agree with your sentiments of not having Dorothy gush about Roger, but I feel [in accordance with the season II relationship dimensions] that roger develops more respect for Waynright that in these scenes, and that it is this that produces that addictive romantic tension that we all love.

I would love to see a finally with light romantic overtones and a decent [but not over-dramaticized]action scene. Who is Ms Elquill in relation to the plot? You've got an intriging/great villan going as her brother, but she lacks solid connection in my view. I am definatly liking the directions you are headed, but am confused when backtraking.

Perhapse mixing in a 'deviation plot' idea from one of the second season's shows-I kind of got a "Negotiation with the Dead" feel about this one- [another one of my favorite and somewhat underplayed] would tie in your particular plot twists really well with the show's style and interwine your own creative paths.

If nothing else, I wanna say I like it very much. I look forward to stumbing across more of yours. I love that you want review, but you definatly have the right ideas in my book.

PS I found only a few grammar/spelling issues, but I suspect it is result of spell check error. Otherwise, you have some of the better written/composed stuff I've read. {and I look!}

Thanks for your thoughts!

Norastar

very good stroy i like it very much...umm when i revewed your act 3 story did i um type anything u see i had it all typed then i found out i wasn't sighnd in so i copyed wat i wrote then signd in and um i cant remember if i pasted it yah um any ways very good please update

Hello! I just want to take this opportunity to say... I LOVE THIS STORY! OMG! Ok I know things can get disracting but, its almost been two years and you have 7 reviews! (Looking sad) I thought you said you needed only one review to continue with the story! By the way "I love you!" (laughing histarically) I don't mean literally but, you know. What you did with Roger saying Dorothy is his fiance was great! Especially in front of ANGEL! Ok, well, like you, I don't hate angel, but I would definitely say I'd rather see Roger and Dorothy together. Anyway, this story is breath-taking! I love how you pay attention to detail! I really hope you continue this story. (Pleading) Well if you already have and I just haven't found it yet, that makes me feel a little better. However, GREAT JOB, I love it! Can't wait to see what happens next! HAPPY NEW YEAR!-

leave it and continue, i like it.

I really ike your story, R/D is a good pairing

hey, awsome chapter! I absolutely love this story, it's the best. You just gotta update, I wanna know what's up Dice's sleeve.

Please continue!

Lataz

I must say that your writing is simply the most acurrate fan-fic, I haven't even finished reading chapter one and I am already writing a review. I think its great that you write as it is meant to be played out (as in the Tv show), rather than just write something totally unparrallel to the theme and add the characters. In other words your writting fits and I am now a big fan of it... please continue writing and I'll continue reading, and if there is anything I can do to help, anything please feel free to ask. I now have a new favorite anime along side Cowboy BeBop and Kenshin and it is Big O writen by Lady Hinoto.

I found your second chapter to be very enjoyable. It certainly held my interest. Dice is a wonderful villain. I like your touches of humor to lighten the tension too. It IS hard to write something like this; you find yourself going back and forth on some things so much. I can't imagine what you would want to change in this chapter, though. Roger, Dorothy, Norman, Dastun and Angel were all well depicted.

I look forward to your next chapter *_*

I'm intrigued. Please keep writing!

Again, I'll beta for you. Now will you PLEASE keep writing?