Wow. This story is hauntingly beautiful. I love Jenna so much, and this breaks my heart to read. Wonderful job.

This was so wonderfully written, you are very talented. I love the way you capture emotion.

"I wish we weren't born with the promise of blood on our lips in twenty years."

Nice use of imagery!

This was my favorite line: "I love them the way I love the sentence before the last of a good book—with terror and happiness and pain."

Again, very well written!

This is really well-written. It sounds exactly like something Jenna would say!

This is so beautiful and sad you wrote it beautifuly and your a good writer

Sad, but absolutely beautiful. I miss Jenna T_T Can't wait for the next book!

Oh my god!