Nicely done! You wrote their characters flawlessly, and this seems like a very realistic possibility. Awesome!

I absolutely love this! First of all, because I wouldn't have seen the deleted scene at all if it hand't been for this story, and second of all because I love how you show Paris softer side.

And lats but not least, you just get the Gilmore vibe...I could totally imagine seeing this scene on TV. )

This made me smile. Paris blantantly outing Rory's crush on Jess, Jess pretending not to care too much but not managing very well. I could just imagine it all happening and it was wonderful. Good work. :)

I like it!