Whew. Still chasing the bad guys, generating more questions than answers. But the ride and the scenery are still exhilirating. Love the appearance of the Goose; I have a Grumman Albatross in one of my stories. Solid research and excellent writing, as I've come to expect. Thank you, and keep writing.

Well-written and engaging story. I could wish for it to be broken into shorter chapters (I seldom read 20K words at one sitting), but that's a personal preference - my early stuff has chapters at least as long. The detail in your description of foreign locales shows either first-hand knowledge or first-rate research.

Oho! Excellent writing, witty dialogue. So much more light-hearted than one expects from Gunslinger Girl. I'm going to have to look up the comic on Deviantart before I go any further. Thank you for such a great story.

Solid work as always, mate.

Fantastic first attempt, mate.