This is kind of amazing. I usually don't end up commenting on stories (for some strange reason, idk), but this one... this one was amazing. I loved the language and patterns you used. honestly, just brilliant.

I love it, I love the 'endless cycle' style. but you wanted feedback and the only thing i could think of that would improve it is instead of taking it all the way back to "...she always beat me there." is to end it at "That was just for me." that sentence has a much greater impact and is just perfect to end it.

Very well written. Leaves the reader satisfied, yet wanting more.

OMG I can't believe how much I loved this, it was ingenius (sp?).

I was surprised at how much I enjoyed this! Your writing style is very fluent and eloquent, you have a real talent here.

The perspective is original and works really well, and Draco's characterisation is superb. Have you thought of writing the same story from Hermione's perspective? I love how she comes across as strong and aloof - a side not usually put across so well in fanfics.

All in all, a very good story!

This was pretty great.

Thanks for writing it.

WOW! I love it!

I was hot and sad at the same time! How does that happen?

I'm tearing up here. The thought of them being together, loving each other but still not be able to really be together is devastating!

This is without doubt the best piece of fanfiction I have ever read!

xxxx

Well now, that was a happy surprise. I didn't have a bit of trouble reading it, At All. For it not to be my particular taste, I really enjoyed it. The lemon was written well enough to be heated, but not vulgar. Which is a hard balance to find sometimes. As for the ending, the loop was a great was to finish it. It wouldn't work for many one-shots, but in this case it was perfect. 3 T.F.C.

Wow Impressive! This is different from the usual smutty lemons - it ends exactly how it starts and that makes this unique.

Isn't it a vicious cycle? The angst is evident - the day is tedious, dragging you down... and only at night do they come alive.

Truly... truly...

But the hints - does Hermione only use him for his body? She doesn't tell him she loves him and she dominates and teases him. All the same, it seems he is obsessed with her. Overly lustful too.

'Day in... Day out.'

Pleasant twist :)

Holy shit. This is probably one of the best peices of fiction I have ever read. I made an account simply to review this and let you know how amazing I think this is.

I absoulutely love the way it's written and how his emotions and feelings pretty much tell the story. Lemon or not, I really loved this. I haven't come accross a good bit of writting in some time and this is definitely what I look for. I also liked how he's simply a tortured victim of the lie they're making theirselves live. It even helped me with a bit of a block I had. I needed intense and that's what you've got. So thanks are in order, I believe. (:

BY FAR my fav draco/herminoe fic ive ever read! so good! so sad! LOVE IT!

Totally amazing. Wonderfully written, I'm glad to see you haven't lost it :D I am now going to read Hermione's Thirteen Reasons.

really good story. well detailed and very sexy :)

i love your stories. i dont really know how to describe it, but it was a great one shot