Ohh so sweet! It was well written, not to sappy. I know this story is WAY old now, but it's so good, I had to leave a review :3

Awwww. That was so sweet. You should make a a sequal like when Link comes back to the meadow when he's older or even when he needs to learn Saria's song! I love this story!

Lord KaioShin

Aww. Link and Saria are so cute together! :)

Continue on this, please!

First of all, i like it. You have a great style for writing serious, and i like the description and the dialogue. There's just a couple things in the story that don't go with the game, like i don't think water balloons are in Hyrule, and when Link left for the first time he was only 10, but that's just the Zelda-purist talking in me :) Write more pleez, i like this a lot, even though i'm a Link/Malon meself, but even better if it's Link/Me...