Ollie,

normally, i don't even bother reading one-shots. not worth the time for an underdeveloped story. however, your one-shot was actually really good, just like the rest of your work. keep it up, can't wait to see the next story!

Selwyn, the Sentinel

You GOTTA write more! Please!

I don't think you love me any more! :(

JimS

dancing on riddles grave if it is allowed. loved the story.

As always an excellant story.

I REALLY like this story... you could go from here a harry has his parents type story... harry and Neville could be totally different boys being allowed to have different upbringings. If there is a vote I vote continue!

Love you

Mae

Very good. Definitely interested in a series or multiple ch.

Very sad.

And no Luna.

But it will give you more time to work on One is the Loneliest Number.

Alan

Quite an interesting and tragic tale. I could see a story of Harry growing up with no Voldemort, no Dursleys, no manipulation by Dumbledore. Maybe a betrothal to someone, then finding Ginny? Or a betrothal to Ginny who doesn't really care for the idea?

Lots of room to play.

This brought me down.

But it was well written, my friend (:

You should continue writing more stories.

You're good at it.

Not at all what I thought it was going to be. Very strange, very random, yet well written and thought out.

nicely done. though i am not sure where you could go from here.