its great

this is a great star wars fic

wow noroi is a very bold girl and this a great fic

Well...you can guess what I'm going to say Amychan(whatever your number is lol) erm...well as u know I'm not a big fan of star wars animation or normal but one question where's jarjar he's the only one I can really remember. good though I like the way the dialogue and the way the style of ritting changes as it switches from person to person it gives it the sort of "it is defo this person now" feel even thought the chan and San and kin and techer in Japanese does get bait boring and some what annoying but that's just me but it's good for people that may get confused as to who's point of view they are reading now sort of thing. Please bring jarjar back his the best. As far as the story line And actuall wording it's good. Just that I'm not into star wars lol peace out dudes x

i like this fic

its the second best star wars fic i have read

great just great

Ashoka is worrying for Noroi's safety? Noroi smiles inwardly when she See's her? I think you're going to change the rating to T and make the genre a'la romance. *French music starts* What the- FRENCH MUSIC? WHO PUT FRENCH MUSIC ON!

like this fic so far