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What the... stomach kiss?

Cute.

Awww... So cute! I'm tired of reading stories about Yellow being all-so-powerful and stuff, and this story just provided me the opposite! It's so sweet of Red and adorable of Yellow in this fic! I swear that the characters never went OOC throughout the entire story. It's just so sweet! Love it!

That was just goddamn adorable. The stomach kiss made me laugh actually, though not as much as your 'ghost reader' comment. You can thank that for this review.

Nice job on the chemistry, taking this story as a fav.

Hahaha, you did well getting a stomach kiss in, I'd have never managed something like that. It wouldn't have ever been as cute (a word I overuse a lot) as yours.

It's pretty good. Off topic, has anyone ever sent you a review using all 10,000 characters? Then I shall be the first! 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Very cute, I loved it!

-Rai

D'awww. That was adorable! This is the first time I saw a fanfic with Red taking care of Yellow; it's usually the other way around. Anyway, the fluffiness made me smile like an idiot. Really, this was tooooo cute! Thank you for providing us readers with this adorable oneshot! :)

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This fic was too adorable! It's nice that Red took care of her. :) Feel better, Yellow!

it was cute and interesting...

And I couldn't finish my review tnx to my iPod so o do it now. Soo Cute and it's upper common in Japan when a girl/ guy gets sick the one who's interested in her/ him will take care of her/ him. Red stil needs to think before action you're not going to push up the pjs of a girl seriously people will get the wrong impression. I blame manga for it and anime, but that still rocks.

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