Nice job! Great use of detail and story structure to show insight into Jackson as a werewolf. I like that the transformation wasn't the instant good that he thought it would be.

Loved it, adds a great deal of depth to jackson's character...that would make one awesome pack. Would love to read more of this!

Interesting.

This has been a good one-shot and a good look into Jackson's character and psyche. You should write a sequel to this heading into the second season of Teen Wolf to show Jackson's growth as a person.