Aww Sweet story :)

"Sometimes you just want to see a giraffe." Is there anything so true?

Hopeful, kind of nostalgic, and true to the characters' dialogue. Very, very nice.

I liked this. It was very funny and I just loved the way you portrayed Dr. D and his lovely green sidekick. Keep it up!

Funny little story,

Nice conversation between Drakken and Shego. And very funny spontaneous decision to go to the Zoo to see giraffes.

I like the name Shea you took for Shego, but the change from Shego to Shea and Drakken to Drew went a bit abrupt in the story, almost making me think there was a spelling error. Sometimes it's handy to introduce a new name, that way the change doesn't feel weird.

keep up the good writing,

reader101w

Good bones.

Still, that said, I think you should come back to it at some point and re-vamp it. Definitely give yourself some distance first and just go for it.

The reason I suggest doing so is that it doesn't feel quite finished. I think smaller details need to be added in to make it more whole. For example, it would be good to know the setting before we get the "giraffe" line. I -personally- believe that will make it funnier too... a giraffe in the kitchen and of course it breaks up the description, probably from Drakken's point of view, of the delicious breakfast. In my head, a detailed, loving description of breakfast should be broken off (either mid-thought or not) about a giraffe. Drakken is a fickle, giraffe loving creature. No shame.

Anyhoo, at this point I can't see this as finished, merely as just a good start.

But hey, it is still good!

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