Nice job!

~hollybridgetpeppermint

cnt believe u wrote that in 10 mins it was actually realy good! kep writin!!

OH GOD! THAT WAS REALLY SAD. WHO IS THAT OTHER GIRL ANYWAY? BUT IN REALITY, RON LOVES HERMIONE AND HERMIONE ALONE. DOESN'T SHE? PLEASE SAY YES. *sniff*

OMG! I actually cried a little, yeah I know it sounds pathetic but it was awesome!

the girl is eather lavender or pavarti (excuse the spelling)

little odd, she is. oh well. i like it anyways.

OOH!! make one from ron's POV!!! I'd love to see that!! poor hermione... hmm, I wonder who was ron looking at... i hope it's not lavender.. maybe it's angelina!! oh well, i guess it's not da point, I'm just wondering...

WONDERFULLLL!!!! Really good stuff for something written in 5-10 minutes.

That was a really beautiful poem.

^^ kawaii!!!!!! really nice, i usually don't read poems, especially the ones that rime at every line, they seemed a bit forced, you know, like a search for a word or somthing, but this one wasn't at all like that and so sweet!!! ¬¬ i think i've said that already..... oh well!!! good job!!! i love it! ^^

that's so cute