Hey sorry school has been keeping me busy, but mange to review really good:)

A very beautiful ending of this story.

I can't wait for the other stories. And i have a feeling we haven't seen the last of Shock and Zira yet, who knows what could happen. But either way you did great friend, i can't wait for the rest.

A lot of greetings from Shock, your very good friend and fellow author.

oh... it finished... :'(

I'm still confused about what exactly happened to Zira, but I don't really mind, because this story was SO EPIC!

You NEED to make a third story in this series!

... No pressure or anything, obviously :P

Shock is finally defeated.

We will never forget you Shock, and this chapter was really great. The final battle was awesome, a great story, well done man.

Skully is just FTW. XD

I'm glad you've started updating this again, it's your best story by a LONG way :D

I didnt review this chapter yet.

The one thing you do amazing is the way you make your villains. If you look at Meph, who was the antagonist in Demotivation and is now something of an anti-hero in this story. And Shock, who starts out as a minor character now becomes the main villain. Thats really awesome work.

And you make Carl and Denise romance as the best. You just can't get enough of their love story. Great job man.

Bonjourno, very good chapter, can't wait to see what you have in store:D

:O

I like this story :)

Great chapter. I finally got to shoot someone, alright.

Hey, this is a really good story, really enjoying it so far:)

XD me happy theres more XD

Another awesome chapter, and a good song to. And the cliffhanger, can't wait for the next chapter.

Hey, really good:), can't wait to the next chapter, really liking the story so far:)

Wow, sucks to be Skully :P

This is getting more and more epic, keep it up bro!