|Reviews for The Remains Of Lawrence|
| Wolf579 5/3/13 . chapter 10
That was a awesome story I really really loved it please continue please please hurry it up but if you can't that's okay to just take your time
| Vloom 3/7/13 . chapter 10
omfg, you need to continue this, I beg you! AND WHERE IS THE ADAM/LAWRENCE ;_; I'm tired of reading poop about Hoffman:D Umm sorry, but please continue? C:
| Guest 1/7/13 . chapter 8
Ohhh...I really really like Hoffman in this (and his relationship with John)! Thank you so much!
| Gonduana 1/5/13 . chapter 10
Yeeeey you're back :D and with another awesome chapter!
This is getting very interesting, can't wait to see what is going to happen next!
Pleeeease update as soon as you can ;)
| nicoleb 1/5/13 . chapter 10
AWWW! This chapter was CUUUUTE, Stella! Also, you got a job? REALLY? XD But yeah, AW! Drunken Hoffman is always freaking adorable, especially when he's angsting about his sister and crappy childhood. We always have to give them crappy childhoods, right? _ And I love how he f*cks with Amanda. That manipulative b*tch deserves a taste of her own medicine. I can definitely see Hoffman using her in the past for a quick f*ck, but I'm glad we don't have to see that. Hoffman's too hot and awesome for her. Besides, we all know he's been doing it with Lawrence while Lawrence is asleep. :3 I love how he gets mad at Lawrence and pummels him for saying he doesn't care about anything anymore. Wah, wah, Hoffman. It's so hard being you, right? :D And if I wasn't completely sure in my faith for you and Hoffles, I'd be so worried for Lawrence right now. Or, I am worried for him, but only because of Amanda, that b*tch. I'm still hoping she'll die. I'm awesome like that. O But hurry up and update, d*mn it! I wanna see some more adorable angst with Lawrence and Hoffman (and Adam, when he returns _)!
| Gonduana 9/29/12 . chapter 9
Amazing story, it actually gave me chills.
Hope you update soon )
| stranger.than.normal.strange 3/3/12 . chapter 7
My favorite bit was the part when Gordon asks Hoffman to clean the smudges on the cabinet and wall. It's literally like the guilt and sadness of Adam's questionable death is making him go a little insane. I loved it. Please update again as soon as you can, but don't rush yourself. xoxo
| stranger.than.normal.strange 2/5/12 . chapter 6
I couldn't say enough about your work as it's done beautifully with just enough sharp perspective to give the shape of Lawrence's character. This story is exactly what I need right now. Just amazing job. Please continue and update soon. xoxo
| nicoleb 1/17/12 . chapter 5
GUH! I think I missed out a chapter in my reviews. _ That's what I get for writing them out in Microsoft Word, I guess. XD Sorry about that. I'm adding this "review" without logging in so that you'll have a count for every six chapters (shallow, I know XD), but I'm staying logged out so you can delete it if you want to. I guess this is karma for me being so behind in my reviews, huh? ;)
| nicoleb 1/17/12 . chapter 6
AWWW! That was so CUTE (as usual XD)! I mean, yeah, it was f*cking annoying to have to hear about Lawrence and Hoffman talking like they think Adam's dead, what with Hoffman offering to check "Adam's" level of decay (*Rapes him for that.*) and Lawrence saying Adam should get a proper funeral even though he's not dead (*Rapes him for that.*), but other than that it was AW. _ Lawrence is so traumatized and indifferent, and Hoffman is kind of sweet to him when he's not hitting him and raping him off-screen! ;) And Lawrence's self-hatred is so adorable, too! Well, he SHOULD hate himself; he failed Adam! He should thank God Adam was smart enough to fool that b*tch Amanda (not that that's hard, of course XD), or I'd be VERY angry! ;) And for some reason, I find it adorable that Hoffman will give Lawrence sympathy when he doesn't expect it, but won't when he does. Kind of like all the off-screen rapes... Ah, who am I kidding? Hoffman would rape Lawrence whether Lawrence expected it or not. He's only human. _ And yet again, you wrote Amanda and Jigsaw very well, but I hate them too much to really care too much. I guess it's better to have IC assholes than OOC a*sholes, though. XD I love how Lawrence gets his jailers to punish him on purpose because he feels so bad about Adam (again, as he SHOULD!). I get visions of Hoffman handcuffing Lawrence and spanking him when it's his turn to punish him. ...Hey, I can dream, right? We all know that's what's happening off-screen, anyway. ;) Anyway, update soon! I'm dying to get some more Adam-scenes! _
| nicoleb 1/17/12 . chapter 4
That was so freaking CUTE! First off, I'm glad all Lawrence did in this chapter was feel guilty and horrible about thinking he couldn't save Adam. Because you SHOULD feel like that, Lawrence! XD And Hoffman... AWWW! I love how IC you made him and Amanda's rivalry and Jigsaw-admiration-craving! That was so CUTE in Saw VI (the Hoffman part, at least; nothing Amanda did was cute XD)! And the way he KNOWS how Lawrence feels because he lost his sister, and how he doesn't hurt Lawrence as much as he SAID he would when he doesn't eat! AW! I'm so sure those two are having hot, off-screen sex right now, I'll say that Whannell's straight if they're not. ;) And AWWW! Lawrence is just so... DEAD inside! As he SHOULD be! You're damn lucky Adam was smart enough to save himself, Lawrence, or we would so kill you. As it is, your despair and guilt is so CUTE! ...Damn, we're horrible people, aren't we? XD And AW at how Hoffman got p*ssed at Lawrence for ignoring him! He was probably annoyed because he wanted Lawrence to notice how hot he was an compliment him on it. Arrogant bastard. XD And I love how he THREATENS Lawrence to eat all the food, and that it had better be eaten when he gets back or he'll shove it up his ass! ...Okay, he didn't say that last part, but we both know that's what he would've done. XD And it's ADORABLE how he tries to level with Lawrence's grief, too, thinking that if he's as upset as he is about Adam's non-existent death, he'd be even more upset if his family died. ...Hoffman, you may be smart most of the time, but in this case, you're a dumb-ass. Lawrence would be MUCH more upset about Adam dying than his dumb family dying. *Rapes him for not knowing that.* Oh, and don't even get me STARTED on all the awesome implications there are with Hoffman sleeping in Lawrence's room. We all know what's gonna happen off-screen, don't we? XD And it's ADORABLE how Lawrence DREAMS about Adam at the end of the chapter (once again, as he SHOULD!). AW! _ And, as usual, your IC-ness for Jigsaw and Amanda is both extremely impressive and a bit scary. XD It's a good thing you're so awesome, or I might be scared they were influencing you with their alien powers, or something. XD Not that I care much about them; Adam, Lawrence, and Hoffman are the important characters in this fic! _
| nicoleb 1/17/12 . chapter 3
AWWW! That was so ADORABLE! First of all, Lawrence tied up and gagged is HOT! XD Secondly, I love how Lawrence doesn't trust Jigsaw and demands to speak to his family before he agrees to anything. And then he tells Allison not to call the police, or Amanda will scalp her (well, okay, he doesn't say that, but still XD)! And it was so CUTE how he tried to comfort Diana and be a good dad, even though he was so scared! It was sort of cute how he lied to Allison and told her he loved her, too. XD I have to admit that I was a bit annoyed that Lawrence asked about his family before Adam (XD), but since he starts panicking after Jigsaw tells him he won't help Adam, I guess he couldn't have been calm and collected enough to ask about his stupid family after he asked about Adam. XD The way Lawrence reacts all violently and pleadingly when Jigsaw is a b*stard about Adam is so CUTE! AW! He cares about him so much! _ And no, Amanda, I don't believe you're distraught at all. Stop pretending. *Kills her.* XD And AWWW! The scene with Adam... AWWWWW! He was so SCARED and HELPLESS and LAWRENCE-WOULD-COME-TO-SAVE-HIM-BELIEVING! And the idea that he wanted to catch rats and eat them because he was hungry... Well, I know it's supposed to be disgusting and desperate, but... AWWW! Now I want to make Adam eat a rat, just to see the expression on his face! I'm sadistic. XD And the confusion and exhaustion you wrote when Amanda started touching him (eww XD) and suffocating him was so well-done! I love how he thinks: "Good. I want to get out of here. Get me out of here." AW! He's too tired and confused to use exclamation points anymore! XD At least he knows he doesn't want Amanda touching him, though. I guess you're never too tired and confused to know that. XD And the way he screams for Lawrence as he thinks he's dying... AW! _ And he thinks Lawrence is the only one who cares about him! Do I sense another tragic Adam-past in this fic? AW! That will be so CUTE! XD And you really do write Amanda and Jigsaws horrible characters really well, if that's a compliment. XD I can't wait for Hoffman to make a comforting, off-screen-sex appearance. Sure, I love Adam and Lawrence more (sorry, Marky *Rapes him comfortingly.* XD), but Amanda and Jigsaw are so b*tchy, and Adam's not around in the same scenes, so Hoffman has to even the score and make Lawrence feel better! _
| nicoleb 1/17/12 . chapter 2
AW! You may call it filler, but it was HOT filler! XD I love looking into how Lawrence f*cked up his life in this fic (oh, be quiet, Lawrence. You know you acted exactly like that) and how Lawrence is WORRIED about Adam and Diana (but not Allison; HUH, b*tch! _). Oh, and F*CK YOU, AMANDA! You're just jealous of Adam because he doesn't make people puke when they look at him, unlike you! *Kills her.* I'm so glad Adam's going to be outsmarting that b*tch in this fic (yay for spoilers! XD). Sure, it's not a hard thing to do, but still. XD
| nicoleb 1/17/12 . chapter 1
First off, with the author's notes. UGH! Tell me about it! *Stabs Elwes non-fatally, then sticks a fork in the wound.* I can't believe it's over a year since we had our hearts brutally raped. Time flies, right? XD Now, review-time! AWWW! That was so CUTE! Especially when Lawrence thinks he's dead, and then he STOPS being dead! That sounded so freaking adorable! XD And Lawrence is worried about Adam! Now THAT'S canon! And I love how you make Lawrence half-disgusted, half-proud to be complimented by Jigsaw (who really IS worse than the devil, BTW; the devil, at least, wouldn't make such cute guys suffer!); it really sets the tone for the fic, with Lawrence struggling between his canon-self and non-canon-self (XD). And AWWW! Lawrence wants to SLEEP! Well, we can't always get what we want, can we, Lawrence? Needless to say, Stella, this fic is looking AWESOME already, and I'm so happy to be finally catching up with your much-deserved reviews! _
| Mistress Of The Macabre 10/2/11 . chapter 3
Oh. My. God.
I am in love with this fic!
The way you've written it so it flows off the scene at the end with Jigsaw fitting the foot onto Lawrence is just amazing! I am addicted to this! :D
Usually when I think of Saw 3D, I feel depressed, but this fic is just brilliant!
Great job, my friend! -