Sad story - all the little Padawans, lost in the galaxy. At least they have the Force.

I don't mean to pull an Obi from TPM here, but, "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" You killed Rinko. And that little girl, Lissie. You're... you're... just like me. I totally would have done something like that. Can't have our Jedi friends get too happy, now can we? Anyway, great job on this! It isn't over, is it? It's too good to be over! You didn't mark it as complete, so that means there's more! Yay!

Exciting beginning and I hope you continue. Way to go with the finger given to Anakin!

Wow. This is really your first story? Wow. I think you could make this much longer than a two-shot; the plot is interesting enough. I just have two questions: What about Rinko's Master? And how did a clone know that they were Jedi? This is great, and I can't wait for more.