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   DreamOfTheEndless 11/30/11 . chapter 12Thank you for the extras. You are most gracious:) X0X0 |
| DreamOfTheEndless 11/30/11 . chapter 11 And the Heartbreak Girl gets her heart mend and a HEA:) Lovely! Thank you so much. X0X0 |
| DreamOfTheEndless 11/30/11 . chapter 10 Things are nicely falling into place. Good work! X0X0 |
| DreamOfTheEndless 11/30/11 . chapter 9 I am not really that big into the idea of fics written on song prompts whereby I'm required to know/listen to the song to get the feel for the story, so quite possibly I am missing out on a lot here. But I think you have a beautifully mellow way with words. Very lovely. Best, X0X0 |
| DreamOfTheEndless 11/30/11 . chapter 8 Thanks for the lovely chapter, bb. X0X0 |
| DreamOfTheEndless 11/30/11 . chapter 7 Ahh, Edward is a rock star! Nice:) Thank you,bb. X0X0 |
| DreamOfTheEndless 11/30/11 . chapter 6 Thank you for the chapter, bb. More of poor, poor Bella. Best, X0X0 |
| DreamOfTheEndless 11/30/11 . chapter 5 Thank you for the chapter, bb. Poor Bella! Damn, such bad luck with boys:( Best, X0X0 |
| DreamOfTheEndless 11/30/11 . chapter 4 hmn... maybe I should wait so I can read things more thoroughly. I'm a bit confused. Rose and Bella have been friends for 15 years, since Bella (or Rose) was 7. That makes them 22-ish now. How old is Emmett? If he is still in high school, isn't he a little too young for them? Is that intentional, or am I reading it wrong? I'm actually a bit unclear on what happened to Malcolm too. Sorry about all this, sweetie. Let me just read this again:) Awesome:) X0X0 |
| DreamOfTheEndless 11/30/11 . chapter 3 Thanks for the chapter, lovely:) Rose sounds like a really nice girl. Best, X0X0 |
| DreamOfTheEndless 11/30/11 . chapter 2 Hmn... ok, what happened there? Renee's house burned down as she was pumping gas. She saw it from where she was standing. Then she went to pick up Bella at the airport. And from the look of it she has some bad news to share as well. Do I have it right? Man, that blows!:( Thank you for the beautiful chapter. X0X0 |
| DreamOfTheEndless 11/30/11 . chapter 1 Hey sweetie! I never realized you wrote stories! Wow:) I'm super swamped at work today, but loved this chapter. Looking forward to reading the rest after work. Thank you. X0X0 |
| miaokuancha 10/22/11 . chapter 12 I love how he fudges with the date numbers. Bella is a brave girl to let herself love. |
| miaokuancha 10/13/11 . chapter 11 A lovely conclusion to this little tale. Thank you for sharing it with us! |
| miaokuancha 10/13/11 . chapter 10 This line is completely stunning: "It was as if her life was a limbo bar, and it just kept dropping, and she just kept bending, trying to just keep going." No Bella, it's not Jasper who is waiting at the end of your rainbow. |
