Perfect. My jaw and face hurts from laughing so much! HAHA! Please, make more.

Oh gawd, I can't stop laughing! Really a great crack fic. This really isn't safe to read in public. Thanks to you my eyes are watering from having to keep my voice down. Thanks for the fic!

This is helerioss, please write more!

Oh my, you had me bursting out into fits of laughter every couple of seconds. Your ideas and writing were hilarious- I loved it.

OMG loved it

I think I shit myself I was laughing so hard

This is the greatest thing ever! pleaaaasee write some more? :)

LOL! That was so amazing. I haven't laughed that hard in ages. Very well written and I look forward to the possibility of more poker nights in the future!

I loved it. It was a great story.

Love it. I'd love to see another chapter...and you got the tone of their relationship just right...excellent work!

OMG LMFAO this was so awesome i hope you do more i laughed my ass off omg i love the books so much but never fear i just found out on Monings page that she is doing 5 more books in the fever universe and a comic with Jericho and mac the next 3 are Danny books an then the last to go back to Mac

Please do more it was soooooo good and funny! Maybe make barrons choose something for mac to do

That was so funny! You are the boss! Make Mac win everytime and make all of the men do silly things! Hitting on Lor! Ha! Ha!:)

This was soooo funny! I can't wait for the second chapter!

Please, please, please write some more!

Totally awesomeness!