Omigod. I loved this. This was genius. Complete and utter genius. The thing with Heiji screaming "Get on the bike!" Made me crack up, not to mention Shinichi and Kaito's reactions. All it took for Heiji and Kazuha to get together was for him to steal a plastic orange trumpet.

Yay.

This is WOW! I love it! Simple but amazing plot :)

Awww! That was so sweet! I totally love the shows that you wove in too! Kazuha has good taste in TV. ;)

I love every scene and part of this story. From "Get on the bike get on the bike!" to the Big Damn Romantic Gesture, to the letter to Future Heiji, and to the confession. You write very well, and... how to say this... you "manipulate" the words to make this story much more awesome.

I must say, Kaito sure knows how to add comic relief in there. XD

Excellent story. :) Keep up your amazing work!

I wish there's a "like" button for FFnet. I love this one-shot (along with all your other stories)! Simple, sweet, and short. Can't get any better :)

Spotted all the references! So great to finally read a story of yours again! Keep them coming! :)

I didn't stop giggling throughout this whole thing. It's a great Oneshot, one of my favourite HejiKazuha stories on this site :D Also, I love how you wrote Kaito XXXXD

So sweet! :)

oh wow you've updated! and heiji x kazuha nonetheless! after few years huh? am so glad I'm able to read it now, it made my day...or night, as it is here:) lovely as always and i can't help this wide smile i've got after reading it. wonderful, wonderful. write more kazuha x heiji again, will you? :) all the best.

ASDFGHJKL; You know, I'm almost more passionate about Heiji/Kazuha than Shinichi/Ran, so I just love this. It made me smile a lot. And the ending line? UNF.

I'm wondering if the reference to HIMYM is the orange trumpet, since it reminds me of Ted and Robin. You've a lyric of Jon McLaughlin's "So Close". Aaand the other references are mentioned by Heiji. :DD

First of all, I'm so happy you updated. It made my day/week and probably the month. Because I love your stories so much!

This little story is so cute, and you still manage to catch the Heiji-and-Kazuha-ness so well 3 I love their little argument about the "Big Damn Romantic Gesture", Shizuka's little speech about wanting grandchildren (I was celebrating this part so much! Oh please, I so do hope, that she will say this in the Manga too!) And the funniest part

Kaito:"I would like to offer some constructive criticism—"

I was laughing so hard D

Thank you for uploading! And I hope that the muse/mood/and fun to write will return to you always and always again D

Loved the story and the manner you wrote it in. I felt light-hearted/cheery(?) reading it which is a really good thing of course. It's so simple yet a very delightful read. Good job!

sooooooo this isn't exactly that comment on LJ you've been waiting for, but I figure it's a close second, right? :D

THANK YOU AGAIN FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL LITTLE FIC MY DARLING NADDY ;; it was so wonderful and I just read it again and felt all these tingles and twinges and butterflies in my stomach (also, read the newest chap of mishounen produce, guh amazing).

Heiji is so dumb and Shizuka is so smart X3 I also love Kaito trying to help Heiji steal things XD also, you KNOW I caught all the references :P

Oh and did I tell you - like 4 days after I read this fic, I was cleaning my room and found a letter past!nicki wrote to future!nicki. I KID YOU NOT. it was a ridiculous letter XD but still, SUPER SERENDIPITY :D

ilunaddy 3 thanks again 33

i can only spot How I Met Your Mother since that's the only TV show i watch, out of the ones you mentioned. i couldn't find Enchanted though. i guess i just have to read it again ;]

anyway i loved this! i truly loved Shizuka in this. it's so .. her. LOL

good job!

til next time..

Ah, this is it! This is it! The one you said to me in your message! /flails

The love I have for you and our OTP just keeps on growing and blooming. From the mention of the trumpet situation, I knew right ahead it was from HIMYM, and the other references too.

Heiji and his surprisingly Holmes/Watson reference of a confession.

Ah, you're just really awesome.

*fangirls*