please please part 3! love this!

love your stories, I'm super hooked and fascinated with this release anxiously awaiting the continuation.

You are a evil sob but for some reason the story was good in my mind only Lois will get her pay back from that prick

Natalie...wow!

Again, I'm just amazed by this story. Yes, it's violent and harsh, but you've made no secrets about that. And while I do enjoy a good Clois story with a happy ending, I do every now and then like to expand the types of stories I read. To see things from a different perspective with different range of emotions.

So far, this fic is unlike any Clois stories I've ever read and it's interesting to see this fic being told from Clark's POV. And because of that, we get to see how truly evil he really is. Only a heartless b*stard would want to keep Lois from her child AND to turn him into a Luthor. A carbon copy of himself without super-powers.

It's so sad to see Lois suffering so much and while it appears that Clark has the upper hand, I'm hoping that there will be a little light in Lois' life other than her son of course.

Update soon. :)

Good Story

Wow! CL is com