|Reviews for It Began With Death|
| Perfect-Wretched 5/14/12 . chapter 2
I like it!
I think you wrote as Homunculus very well, though the female version admittedly caught me a little off-guard.
You managed to pull it off, though.
You missed very few things, and then they were only small. (a comma here, a conjunction there, etc.)I really do hope you finish this.