And...the way you write your drama reminds me of why I find sense for Chell & Wheatley. But that turret... The cube was fine, but he was more like Ratmann's thing already...so it didn't mark me as much as the Turret and Wheatley. :] THis story promise to be surpirsing and very realist.

And well, realist drama litterature quotes Portal catharsis Chell Wheastey Well... For me.

Anyway. Mh...chapter three please? Take your time. It's worth the wait.

Taters is with one t in the middle and its Turret, not Turrents!

Other than that, I love this! *kees* Can't wait for more!

the only problem I have with this is that the Oracle turret like the Normal turret is Female not Male only the deffective turrets are male

That was an amazing story. Great vocabulary! It really shows the connection between the Oracle Turret and Chell. This story is different.