Beautiful! Thank you for sharing.

I love poetry. Sad poetry.
"Not apart, not afraid." That was my favourite part. You did a wonderful job, really. Keep up the good work!

Ohh, this is beautiful. It perfectly captures the feelings of regret they were having in Borrowed Time.

I like the way you compare the dream dance to the the dance of their relationship. Haven't we all taked about the way they dance around each other for 2 deasons now?

Very nice - I like it.

You really have captured the movement and rythem of the dance. Very enjoyable.

Too tired tonight to write a helpful review, but I want to let you know that I read and liked. I almost expected it to continue, though...

That was beautiful! Normally I am not a fan of poetry, but you did a wonderful job! It completely describes the M/L relationship! Great work!

-Hilary

Beautiful. I like the poetic effect, but a little bit irky because it doesn't sound like Logan's exact words, but who really cares...I LOVE IT!

Beautiful, Catherder. This completely sums up the relationship between Logan and Max... "In our dreams we danced together, not apart, not afraid. Why can we touch and dance only in our dreams?" More please!