|Reviews for Forrest and Slade, The Harry and Lloyd Mission|
| jinxed97 9/30/11 . chapter 4
Great story...like the ending with the football thing. Look forward to the next story...assuming it will be Chuck/Sarah.
| Katsumara 9/27/11 . chapter 4
Ha! Great chapter here, PJ with an awesome ending, Haha. Actually.. I suppose I should say great story! Just now realized the big "Complete" thing up there. Definitely enjoyed this one, and haha at the Cubs shot :D
| Jimmy 144 9/27/11 . chapter 4
A classic, 'Nope, still good.' Lol Thanks
| jaytoyz 9/27/11 . chapter 4
A fun wrap up to a fun story. Perhaps you were a little soft on Jeffster but I'll figure out some way to live with it. I'll be keeping an eye open for whatever you decide to do next. Blazing saddles? What about Chuck as everyone's favorite, Navin Johnson? Carina as his first girlfriend, the biker chick...yeah, I could see him bragging about sending home more money because his girlfriend had promised him a blo...Casey as the crazed killer turned process server...Orion as the down on his luck salesman? And of cours, Sarah looks like a girl someone would write the 'thermos' song for...nah, too silly. JT
| Michael66 9/26/11 . chapter 4
Tell Alex, Vick's a whiner!
Had to hold posting the chapter a few hours, huh? ::snicker::
| East Coast Captain 9/26/11 . chapter 4
Looks like we are getting Sarahs mom this Season after all there casting her as we speak shes suppose to be a beautiful blond and a walking hug and her name is Emma. I am satisfied the circle is complete and we have the two sets of parents one parent is already deceased, Orion.
But anyway I love this series, the theme being a simple nerd turning a heartless spy into a human being. Like Jimmy and Alex and of course Charah.
But I wanted to pitch to you a little plot bunny I had. Its the Bartowski ancestor who had the original idea of the Intersect but was laughed at by the scientist community. It takes place in the 1920s. Its an idea but I dont know whether to make him Greek or a Spaniard.
| jinxed97 9/18/11 . chapter 3
Great chapter...still have the idea of Alex stripping.
| jaytoyz 9/17/11 . chapter 3
Thanks for a blast of fun to add to my Friday. Solid writing and, as a bonus, a snort, two giggles and a partial guffaw...looking forward to more. JT
| Katsumara 9/16/11 . chapter 3
Nicely done here yet again, PJ. I'm definitely interested in checking out your upcoming ideas, assuming they all get put down into words. I'm quite certain they'll be a blast to read.
| Jimmy 144 9/16/11 . chapter 3
Very good. Love the Tattoos. Always fun with the Jeffster. Thanks
| East Coast Captain 9/15/11 . chapter 3
You know Season 5 looks great already but Im afraid by the end I might have to retcon my Chris universe to fit in with the new possibly timeline. Like when do Charah have children? But Im confident it will end great.
But great chapter I love the relationship between Big Mike and Morgan.
| jinxed97 9/11/11 . chapter 2
Great chapter...hmmm, Tricia Helfer stripping, such as awesome visual.
| SpreadtheNerd 9/10/11 . chapter 2
Dude I need more chapters! Thanks Murph for the writing, thank you very much. :)
| Katsumara 9/9/11 . chapter 2
Nicely done here once again, PJ. I'm really feeling like I'll love this story, Haha.
| East Coast Captain 9/9/11 . chapter 2
Chicago, historic city but I wouldnt live there I heard a lot of scary stories about some places there but whatever.
I have a question Murphy, besides Chuck what other fandoms are you into?
Tricia Helfer is a sexy woman, its a shame she didnt come back to Chuck she would have made an awesome cast member.