|Reviews for SpiderMan and the Thievius Arachnicus|
| toady28 10/3/12 . chapter 1
I'd suggest making the Lizard either Mz. Ruby (even though, in the game she is a girl) or Raleigh.
| Marvel Man 1/8/12 . chapter 1
Hello, again. I came to help iut with the Marvel character to replace Mugshot. I thought long and hard on who should play him. Then, it hit me: Hammerhead. Both were runts, have superstrength, and both always carry duel guns (check Spiderman shattered dimensions).
| Marvel-man 1/4/12 . chapter 1
Hello, my friend. I couldn't help but notice you need help figuring out who should play Ralpieh (I believe that's his name) the frog. So I come to you for support. Judging by his wealth and his interest in crime/piracy, plus his ability to grow to gargantuan size, I believe the best choice would Wilson Fisk, a.k.a. the Kingpin. I hope I've help you figure out who play Ralpieh. I simply adore this plot.
P.S. I'm not a member, so it will be difficult to contact me.
| GrayHeart 11/13/11 . chapter 1
Awsome please update soon.
| nobreiner 11/12/11 . chapter 1
Not bad so far, definitely loving the character choices. I would recommend a little more original dialogue for the characters, maybe take some quips or back-and-forths from the comics.
| Slightly Nathan 8/24/11 . chapter 1
This was a fun story. There were a few confusing parts with the grammer and such. I'm now probably going to look into the Sly Cooper plot line because this sounds very interesting to me. Some of the main vocab and grammer I saw were in these paragraphs:
paragraph 2 human mutant.
paragraph before bruce speaks revise: "Now, he did look scrawny, and, at the moment, smart like Tony, but when he needs it his strength will become the more noticeable characteristic in later adventures along with Tony's armor."
2nd to last paragraph "they tore the book into five pieces"
There are probably others and I would encourage you to read it again/ proofread it as a reader as if it were someone else's piece that always helps me find things I miss when writing (I go too fast and repeat words or leave them out!)
I'm excited to see who the five are going to be. Doom would be a really interesting character to have to steal from and it'd be really fun to have so great great great grandson of king richard was it? the one that robin hood stole from? anyway random idea. The Riddler... um... superman's nemesis... forget his name... anyway just some fun stuff to think about Happy Writing!