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patchworkteddy 2/26/12 . chapter 1
I will be sending my dentist's bill to you, because you've made my tooth ache with the sweetness XD Ow! Haha.

Okay, fail. Never mind. Onto the review!

I like this (because I love the mundane, remember? LOL) a lot. I don't really know why. You've managed to flesh out Wayne very, very, VERY well, considering the fact that he was barely in the canon (if he was even there...?). You know, I was like, "Who...?" when I first saw the pairing, but, yeah. Anyway, I like how he is portrayed here, as a somewhat cheeky, nice person I'd like as my tea-maker. Pfft. I love that you sneak in little details, and I think that the way you write about the little things, him having a Welsh accent and all that, further assist in making him three-dimensional. Hermione's tone is perfect here, observational, quiet-ish, intellectual. I like how Hermione's all giddy with happiness, because it stresses on the whole 'finding happiness in the mundane' theme. I like how there is the silence at the end, bring out the whole 'you know you love someone when silences aren't awkward' thing :) And the last line is perfect. Just. Perfect. Because I love tea. Okay, that and because it ties up the wonderfully poignant, sweet, lovely fic.

You are awesome.
tenoh27 9/25/11 . chapter 1
Simple and sweet, with a poignancy that which can only be had for those who finds beauty in mundane everyday life. Thank you.

(Although I absolutely have no idea who Wayne Hopkins is, he is, nevertheless, always a better choice than RW).

Thank you.
XB16B2 8/24/11 . chapter 1
Awe-inspiring imagery here. Your sentence structure and the way that you bring in other peoples' opinions and then dismiss them just makes this a really beautiful read.

As much as I love to offer constructive criticism with my reviews, I honestly have none. This was beautiful in its simplicity and I really would have it no other way.

On another note, I'd like to encourage you to check out www. rmimagic .com because your writing and interests really seem to be what they're looking for. It's a great community with lots of opportunities to stretch yourself and your writing and since they're taking applications for their new term now, I'd really like to see you apply so we could write together!

Keep up the good work; I hope to see more from you one way or another.
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