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karlii 11/3/11 . chapter 1
Well done!
Cetra.Starr 9/2/11 . chapter 1
Tony and Gibbs and a mention of Jack and Ianto... SIGH. I really think you like trying to kill me!

Loca
Blue-Eyed Chica 8/25/11 . chapter 1
awwww cute! well not exactly the earthquake part, but others D i was worried a bit when jethro was freaking out about everyone knowing, but glad to know it all worked out (nothing like spying neighbors D )
PhoenixWytch 8/24/11 . chapter 1
Sweet, but not sugary sweet. Just right.

Thanks for writing.
basket-case1880 8/24/11 . chapter 1
Great story. I intended to have read and reviewed this one earlier, but my internet wouldn't work on my laptop or Ipod, so I had to wait for one of them to work. Loved the reference to Torchwood, reminded me that I have a backlog of Miracle Day on my Freeview box to watch. And the views expressed about Ianto, exactly mine. I refused to watch Day 5 of the last season because of Ianto's death.

Laura xx.
alix33 8/24/11 . chapter 1
"Gibbs grabbed his own second-string jeans, tattered at the cuffs and worn in the groin and knees." - Those jeans sound yummy, but very un-Gibbs.

"and strode across the street to Mrs. McAdams, the elderly neighbor across street." - "across the street".
Meilea2010 8/24/11 . chapter 1
Fantastic story. What something like an earthquakke can do for you. Those are very special neighbors that Jethro has.
Shadow Cat17 8/24/11 . chapter 1
Awesome!
Lidil 8/24/11 . chapter 1
Wow.

Good earthquake story.

Gibbs and his Tony.

Well done.
Dreamer22 8/24/11 . chapter 1
I love it! Terrific job! I love the use of what is going on in the real world in this story. Were you affected by the earthquake? I'm living in Boston and while I didn't feel a darn thing I was worried about my family in VA and NY when I saw what had happened, but everyone is okay. I hope that if you, or anyone reading this was affected by yesterday's quake is okay.
tears on the inside 8/24/11 . chapter 1
Really great story and I totaly understand how scary earthquakes can be, we had one in England and I didnt even Know we got them hope everyone was ok.
transcan 8/24/11 . chapter 1
Very nicely written! The world sure could use more of these "modern folks" around. Far too much judgement and hate being thrown around for anyone's good.

The earth was doing some pretty good moving and shaking here in NC, too. Spooky to see the trees swaying without a bit of breeze. How do the folks in California stand it, knowing the big one could come at any time?
Buffyxenaman 8/24/11 . chapter 1
Doing a good job
finlaure 8/24/11 . chapter 1
So Wonderful! Great story!

and the best way to check for natural gas leaks is to make a mixture of water and liquid dish soap. Use a brush or a wash cloth to throughly soak the pipe in question. If bubbles appear,,, LEAVE. Also remember No smoking or starting a car in an area if a gas leak is suspected.

Also check for cracked clay water pipes, mostly by watching your water meter.

Take care!
pfyre1 8/24/11 . chapter 1
ooh - I really like this - sweet but not syrupy - a touch of hurt/comfort and protective Gibbs - all good stuff - thanks for sharing!
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