This is technically adept, in terms of the writing, but I find it disconnected from canon to the point of distraction. Details such as Lilia's acceptance of chaos, her ability to pen a letter, the depth of her feelings for her very recent friend ("I could not hope to imagine a life devoid of your presence"), and her optimism about the massacre while her death was related to depression - they all make this piece seem to surround a situation different than the one we have been presented in the game.