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| Morbane 2002-05-09 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was amazing. And 'that' certainly DID make for a cool ending. It opens up realms of possibilities. If this wasn't such a good, balanced one-shot, I'd be clamouring for a sequel. As it is, I'll just mutter very quietly, ... "maybe you'll consider it?" Roseon... cool... Such inventiveness.. I'm just surprised Simon Ko didn't call the Jynx/MrMime cross "MASTER Jynx" since it looked so juvenile. |
| farla 2001-03-17 ch 1, anon. | abusewow... those poor pokemon. |
| Justice For Nobody 2001-01-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is truly a touching story...and what an unexpected twist! It's very nice to see excellent fanfics in the Pokemon section... |
| Notus Lethe 2000-12-07 ch 1, | abuseI think maybe the saddest thing is that most of my favorite stories are yours. -.- I had read your stories before I had an author's name and I had been thinking about them forever. In fact, this very story inspired a story I am currently writing (although it's not Pokemon) This story was beautifully executed and I just can't believe that you could come up with this. Wonderful. A sequel might ruin it so if you ever do, write it then have someone beta-read it so it doesn't ruin what you have now. And for the ending, (perhaps even a new beginning for your sequel) what if he had someone else put him in the Pokeball? (I am too good mwahaha!) I love this story |
| Axfan2000 2000-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really do want a sequel, this is an excellent story. Now, to do away with inside voices... THIS WAS SPECTACULAR! GREAT! I LOVED IT!!!...ahem... good story. |
| London Clockwork 2000-10-27 ch 1, | abuseI was wondering, if- maybe- you could do a kind of sequle to this? Just maybe? I really, really, like it, and it would be really neat... |
| J-man 2000-10-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease write more of this and your palletpair!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Fish 2000-09-17 ch 1, | abuseWow... wow, wow, wow. An incredible fic. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. |
| Leviathan 2000-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhooooooooooooooooohoooo! there is only one thing that would make me and everyone happy > Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal!Sequal! |
| Charles "RocketBoy" Reilly 2000-04-17 ch 1, anon. | abuse Another cool fic by a great writer. DO NOT WRITE A SEQUEL. It would destroy everything original about this fic. |
| Perry Shinra (10) 2000-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuse That was brilliant! Pokemon meets sci-fi, very interesting and well-executed. Hope you write more like this. |
| Cara (10) 2000-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuse Ooooooh, creepy...I like it.. |
| da-cod (7) 2000-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuse great story. id like to c more |
| Ryan (10) 2000-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuse This story was amazing! I loved the ending... |
| ~MUKMAN~ (10) 2000-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuse extremly orginal and great. I WOULD LOVE TO SEE ANOTHER. this story was PERFECT. ;) |