 Josie 10/23/11 . chapter 10 I simply wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. It is always a pleasure for me to have Meredith portrayed as someone who can "stand up for herself." As well, interesting to have from Lexie's viewpoint, felt you captured Derek's "voice" and fun to have nasty nancy and to bring back Preston Burke.
It seems almost like you are a Mom, nicely done scenes w/ Z. This whole story has the feeling of a vortex of Mer/Lex w/ the other characters moving around, true to character. I liked it very much. |
 skye3 9/21/11 . chapter 10this is so amazing. so so amazing. i read the whole story - it took me one whole day because of RL. haha! but i LOVED it. i've always loved the merlex connection. and i've always felt that we needed to see more of them being sisters. so i really really loved that in your story. plus, your characterization on everyone felt so accurate that every word was so wonderful to read.
okay, i'm heading on to the sequel. :) |
 BekaRoo 9/14/11 . chapter 10Amazing chapter I loved it. :D :D :D :D I loved how Dereks family was involved in this chapter with lexie and mere though I kinda hoped that Mrs Shepherd would have talked to lexie too. Again amazing chapter :D :D :D :D |
 MichelleBell16 9/14/11 . chapter 10I just wanted to say how much I've enjoyed reading this story! I LOVE the relationship Meredith is developing with Zola, and I really hope to see that more in the sequel! I hope Mrs. Shepherd pulls through, and that Meredith and Derek can work things out. I also love that this story explores the relationship between Meredith and Lexie, and I'm looking forward to seeing where that continues to go in the sequel!
Can't wait to read the sequel and hope it's posted soon :) |
 Maeve Morgan 9/13/11 . chapter 10Please tell me you're one of the writers for the show and this is what actually happens in season 8?
*wishful thinking*
Even if you aren't, this was a great read! Other than a few typos here and there, this is read wonderfully. Everyone was quite in character, and I just loved it.
Thanks for writing it! |
 rolly21 9/13/11 . chapter 9so i have finally got around to reading this considering i have had the tab open in my browser for the last couple of days.
i have to say that i absolutely love this and cant wait to read more. |
 Jime-GA-Lover 9/12/11 . chapter 9Hey, I just read your story and it is really amazing I really liked it:) |
 Mariangela 9/11/11 . chapter 9 I LOVE this fic!11 please keep writing! |
 kate 9/11/11 . chapter 9 I dont think I have commented yet, but this last chapter? Really really good! |
 BekaRoo 9/11/11 . chapter 9Great chapter I loved it. I loved the last bit of the chapter it was quite funny :D Cant wait for the next chapter :D |
 eternity in a wildflower 9/11/11 . chapter 8I really like this a lot! You write the Mer/Lexie relationship very well! I hope you write more soon! :-) |
 BekaRoo 9/8/11 . chapter 8I said it once or more than that and I will say it again I so love your story. I love the sisterly bonding and the interaction they have with Zola. I can not wait for th enext chapter :D :D :D: :D :D :D :D :D :D |
 going by me 9/7/11 . chapter 7I've been meaning to comment on this for a while now. This is a fantastic fic. I really like how you write about Meredith and Zola, and Lexie.
I love that you let Meredith sign to Zola. It's a really good way of boosting a child's communication! (although I would say it takes all babies a while to catch on, no matter their native language).
It's a really interesting discussion Meredith has with herself over to what length she will go to treat Zola. It feels like a very real issue considering she's working with children with the same condition. (by the way, I thought that maybe 6 months was a pretty regular time for typical babies to sit on their own, so for a baby with spina bifida, it seems early? but i guess all babies' abilities vary!)
Anyway, this is a great story and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter and hopefully many more to come :) If you want, check out my story, which also deals with Meredith, Derek and spina bifida (sadly, I started it long before Zola was in the picture, so she's not in it). |
 BekaRoo 9/6/11 . chapter 7Another amazing chapter I really love your story and can not wait or the next chapter, I hope lexie and mark get together |
 BekaRoo 9/3/11 . chapter 6I love love love the lexie mere bonding it is great and I cna not wait to see if lexie and mark end up together and how. I can not wait for the next chapter :D :D :D :D |