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Uhg...my heart has just been ripped out and thrown into a pile of hot coals. That was so powerful, I almost can't process it. Beautifully done, absolutely wonderful! Lily

that was a wonderful story, you area gifted writer, i could not help but cry at the end as i felt both Legolas' and aragorn's pain, it was beautiful in a way. Very good.

Brilliant, Beautiful ... *can't find words and wipes tears away*

Aragorn's pain can be felt, but not as much as poor Legolas' pain.

I never thought Legolas would actually do it.

Actually, Aragorn kind of broke the promess he did to Boromir: to protect the White City and the people of Gondor. He gives the whole responsability to Legolas in the same time he askes him to kill him.

But how an elf will be able to lead the human army? The White City and Middle-Earth are therefore doomed :(

But - once again - beautiful story :,-)

Keep up the great work _

That was sweet, and kind, and sad, and perfect, all at once. It gave me kinda a fuzzy feeling inside.

Crawler

I don't cry often from fics, but this is one of the few that really move me. I'm impressed! And thanks.

Wahhh! that was so sad, yet so good!

awww, this is so sad!sob, oh but it's soo good! I love it!more stuff!

so sad, so very sad ... poor legolas, aragorn, boromir, everybody! i didn't actually believe legolas would do it, but i guess that's just how much he loved him, he understood the pain aragorn would be feeling and knew aragorn couldn't live without his love ... *sniffles* brilliant story, btw, totally brilliant

an...um, interesting concept to say the least. I suppose the Corsairs of Umbar in "Return of the King" will destroy the white army, since now there is no King in which to return. But this is fanfiction, neh? Author's freedom. Anyway, the emotional aspect was very good. I liked the play on slash. Very good.

This was okay. It was very well written and everything- just the concept. i realised that you said it was AU, it's just if Aragorn had died than the city of Gondor would have fallen and Middle-Earth would have been lost, also Aragorn loves Arwen.

Well, now that I have that off my chest- i really did like the way you write. Very good!