Ah I really like this! It reminds me of those poor repressed housewives whom, too brilliant for their own good, get stir-crazy and lose their minds. And mixed in with the natural fantasy of Neverland, this little piece really puts you on the edge of what's real and what's not. Nicely done! A rebellious part of me would like to see the possibilities of this continued, but this is still a great stand alone.

Woooahhh... that's crazy. And very well written! I felt my eyes getting larger. I love Peter Pan (and the novels sprung from it) and I think your captured Windy perfectly. Good job!

Absolutely brilliant! At loast one more PP in Scarlet reader who noticed the great potential of the W/H ship in it :))))))

And a touching correlation with my own PPiS inspired stories:))))

Best wishes,

Kate