You've captured the characters perfectly. It's hard to put into words how great I think this is...

It's beautiful, is all I can say...

Please do continue with it.

nice! keep going!

wow! KEEP GOING!

I really like this. I always love it when people put a modern twist on a classic love story - it makes it all the more interesting with a modern twist. This is a cool idea and I hope to see it updated soon. :)

Although, you probably could have expanded on things a teeny bit more. Like when Henri's (Heathcliff?) parents were killed in the car accident, you probably could have written the actual scene and made things more dramatic - though this is the exposition chapter, so what you did is understandable. :)

I love the way you're going with this so far! It's realistic for modern times and still sticks to how Emily Bronte wrote it originally. BEAUTIFUL!