|Reviews for Ever Changing|
| Aronim 5/2/13 . chapter 1
This is quite good. I'm glad I'm not the only one seeing the chemistry and the reference to the "real" Little Red Riding Hood is perfect, fitting for the plot and in the same style as in the films. Well done.
A few nitpicks, suggestions on when your sentences are a bit clunky:
"I'm faced my granddaughter's disappointment and anger before." Pretty sure it should be "I've faced" as in "I have faced...
"This position is the opportunity of a time." Think it should be "lifetime", not just "time".
"Preferably someone who he hasn't known since they were a literal kid, he thinks but doesn't add." I'd shuffle it to "He silently adds: preferably someone he hasn't known since they were a kid."
", with the used-to-be kid he's known since before teenagerhood." Very clunky, but I don't really have a suggestion. I just think it is clumsy and thought you might want to consider changing it.
""The bags and bags of goodies I have in my refrigeration isn't a enough," he inquires, wryly, sitting up." Think it should be an "?" after "enough" as it is a question.
Fun read. Considering that there is only 20 hoodwinked on FFnet in full, I'm surprised there was something as good as this. If you know any place with more good Hoodwinked, please let me know.
| Megan 12/7/12 . chapter 1
Holy s- I don't think it's a dream potion, I think grannys going to make him a human so that Red can be with him, am I right(wink, wink)what do you guys think?
| Djinnk 10/21/12 . chapter 1
please, please think about continuing! it's such a great take on Wolf/Red :D
| Crazy-Pairing-Girl 6/5/12 . chapter 1
Update, update PLEASE! Why... Why haven't you updated...
If needed, I will gladly adopt it!
| James Birdsong 5/28/12 . chapter 1
| D4ncingD4wn 1/1/12 . chapter 1
Thank the Lord I thought I was the only one who saw the pairing! XD So far so good
| Seryan Parks 12/21/11 . chapter 1
What! No! It can't stop there! We don't know what Wolf's dream will be about! MUST KNOW. Please update!
| Light Ebony Dark Ivory 11/13/11 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. It's well written, and it shows promise. I'm happy someone's finally writting a fic for the two of them. They are so into each other.I hope you update soon.
The Living Contradiction
| Navaka114 11/5/11 . chapter 1
Sweet! I'm so glad i wasn't the only one who noticed that Wolf seemed to have a thing for Red(and vise versa)! I hope there are more fics like this, and that you CONTINUE!
| Vasilisa Sabina Rhea Dragomir 10/26/11 . chapter 1
wow im not the only one who thought there was chemistry between them .. this is turning out great and im hoping there will be more so please update as soon as you can because you cant come around these sort of stories and its great when you do find one :)
| Nice 10/8/11 . chapter 1
Really good. Not enough stuff like this. Keep up the good work and all that jazz. I hope to see more soon.
| Anna 10/6/11 . chapter 1
Going great so far! Keep it up and update! Really...update.
| myjumpingsocks 10/1/11 . chapter 1
There's more right? Please say there's more.
Well written, loved it :)
| Scars101 9/24/11 . chapter 1
OMG THANKYOU! someone needs to do a story like this! Wolfxred is awesome
| CloneGirl 897 9/16/11 . chapter 1
lovin' it keep it up.