wow that just got a lot darker. i like your fic.

interesting story... i look forward to thenext chappy! :)

Awesome!

Sorry, but your punctuation is all wrong, to such a degree that it makes it hard to read the fic. Commas should be inside quotations: "Sirius is the hottest thing," she said, instead of "Sirius is the hottest thing", she said. And if you have another punctuation inside the quotes, you don't need a comma after it. It should be "Why is Sirius so hot?" she asked, instead of "Why is Sirius so hot?", she asked.

So, since I'm anal about that sort of thing, I didn't read the story, but I read some of the reviews, and I have to say kudos for making Hermione the meanie and Ron the goodie. So often it's the other way around (even when it makes no sense), that it's gotten horribly predictable, so yay for you doing something totally different :).

that was a exelant start to what i hope will be an exelent story.and you should be prould.

why in the world would a couple of wizards call 911?

i'm not going to be able to review for a while, so i just wanted to say that htis is a good story so far. i can't imagine what harry will be like after this. how are sirius and remus going to treat him now taht harry tryed to kill himself? don't worry, i'll review soon.

Awesome!

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That was mean. ;)

Madame Pomfrey gave the wrong advise for a a person who just commited suicide.

They can be left alone. In fact, they need to be. To think things through. They just need to be checked on everynow and then sometimes. Most of the time, they don't try it again right away, nor will they try it ever again, because they realize what a huge mistake it was.

To over-crowd the person is a HUGE mistake though. That will make make the person who tried to commit suicide nervous and tense, and feel like they can't think. And mostlikely, more willing to try to commit sucide again, only this time, they will be craftier, and have a more serious intent. All due to the overcrowding of the 'friends'.

People who have tried to commit suicide have to be given space, and time. You shouldn't pressure, bother, pester, nag, someone in that state, or try to force them to talk. Especially if you don't know what they're going through.

what the bloody hell u mean u 'not gon make a sequel u have too! we gotta find out whats gonna happen and whos harry gonna go with(if any) dracos rumor hermione EVERYTHING u have too u bloody have to i loved this story but u cant just up and stop i learned the hard way (way inspired by Barb of course) but u have to write a sequel its like should be law or somethin!

mwhahahahahahaha its me!

i finished this in record timing now i can read its sequal!

I cry for Hermione. I, for one, think that she's truely sorry.

TTYL, Robyn.

Heres review #325. I wanted to make it a round num. One word- sequel? Plus one more: Please?