Yeesh...Dawn's a real pyschopath...worse than Dru..and that's REALLY saying something. HOpe you update this!

Toodles.

K.

Great work Ete. Nice style and flow to the writing with dreamy dream sequences. I like.

More! Please! I can only be so patient *grrr* but really, hope you post a little something soon...

I really like your writing; it has style, and its metaphores are beautiful. The dream sequences are amazingly... well, dreamy :) You capture feelings perfectly. Can't wait for more!

OlgaB

uhm...good story so far. Interesting writing style. I was surprised by the whole Dru thing. update soon!

Hmmmm, very interesting. I liked how Dawn came up with the idea of sending Spike. And Angel, Darla, and Dru are all quite creepy in the dreams.

I'm looking forward to the next part.

Ooooooooh... I'm so intruiged... More soon, I hope?

This is great. Your description of the dreams is inspired. And what a cliffhanger. But my favourite line is about the smiles being more bitter than the tears. Looking forward to the next part.

Interesting, so far.

BTW, Drusilla is spelled with an 's' - trust me, that's what she's called in scripts and credits. I know that's nitpicky of me (especially since my own spelling isn't very good), but it always irritates me (and others) when character names are spelled wrong.

Anyway, I enjoyed the first chapter and will keep my eyes open for the next chapters. I like your writing. Beautiful, almost lyrical prose...

What is life ? A frenzy

What is life ? An illusion

shadow, a fiction

the greates good is a minor one;

that all life is a dream,

and dreams, dreams are

Calderón.

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Good story.