Perfect.

I really liked this. Usually, one-shots don't really interest me all that much, especially when there are characters I've never heard about and very little of the one character I wanted to see (Obi-wan).

But I actually read every single word of this one. I liked how you managed to give out quite a bit of information without actually saying it outright. Believe it or not, this one-shot is set up to be a very nice prologue to a full-length story... (wink wink). But if you want to leave it as a one-shot, that's perfectly fine, and it's a very well-written one at that.

Thanks for writing! :)