I like it :)))
Really :)

I absolutely loved the way you presented the two character. With your summary, at the beginning, we can think it is Legolas who's been investigating and was shot by an arrow.
Then of course, the explanation of how he arrived in the middle of the fight against orcs, suggests a BIG TIME ELLIPSE... ;p

Then at the last part, when the two stories connect, it is clearer, and we get to appreciate your constuction A LOT :)))))

Clever way of writing, and in depth too :-)

Keep up the great work ^_____^

Awesome awesome awesome awesome! More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more ok I shut up now.



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allright...you asked for new ideas...and here's one: legolas could take that chick away to some place...and tend her wounds....actually...i had a good idea, and now it is gone...damn...but for my idea to go on, this will haev to become a romance...also, is that girl supposed to be you? in love with legolas, are ya? heh, well, so am I...i'll get back to you about the idea...goodbye