That was absoloutly beautiful. Perfectly in character, skillfully written. Are you a professional?

I can so see Marion and Indy having this conversation! And Indy telling Mutt about his past. I do love you stories! Thanks for updating :)

This is an excellent story you've woven; from beginning to end true to the characters and filling in a lot of blanks at the same time. My favorite moment from the final chapter is this Marion and Indy banter:
"No sane man would turn down one of your back rubs, doll."

"Maybe a sane man wouldn't, but I'm talking to you, mister. Yes or no?"

Perfect.

Brava!

Love this story, all your stories really. I was just an average Indiana Jones fan until I read your work. Then, something clicked and your interpretation of characters and backstory and the way you describe everyone is just so meaningful and beautiful.

Really really great chapter! This story, even though it makes me cry is gold for me because my mind reels about this part of Marion and Indy's past and it desperately needs to be told! I can't imagine it ever being explained better than the way you're fleshing it out! It makes perfect sense and as always you've got all the characters nailed to a T! Next chapter soon please!

I can see all of this so well, from Indy writing his goodbye on the suitcase to Marion's 'dozing off'. I admire the way you deftly crafted this to fit so well with "Seven Days". Great work all around.

nicely done.

OMG yay! So happy you've updated! Aww poor Marion, she does go through some bad times :( And poor Indy, starting to fall for her litte knowing all the heartache that will follow. Please update again soon!

Bravo on another great chapter with wonderful attention to detail.

So glad you updated! Wonderful chapter, looking forward to more :)

more please!

MORE PLEASE! I need more

Another fantastic chapter! Am eagerly awaiting an update :D

As always excellently researched and it shows in the detail of the writing. Thanks for a great chapter, looking forward to more.