MORE PLEASE! I need more

Another fantastic chapter! Am eagerly awaiting an update :D

As always excellently researched and it shows in the detail of the writing. Thanks for a great chapter, looking forward to more.

It just keeps getting better and better! I can't wait for more.

Good chapter :D I'll be waiting anxiously for another update!

Hurrah!

Poor Marion. I guess she got herself kidnapped again - or is this the first time :)

This looks like it will be wonderful - like all your stories.

I like the dynamic between younger Marion and Indy.

Can't wait for more.

Your stories are so fluid it feels more like watching a film than reading... which, for Indy, is perfect. The attention to detail is fantastic - really paints a picture - but it's the dialogue I truly appreciate. Spot. On. Lovely job, my dear. :)

OMG! I'm so excited to see this fic up! Yay :)

Aww poor Marion...I have a feeling Tariq and Rashid are due meet Indys fists?

Promising start.

Yay! A new story! I really think that Spielberg should've hired you as the official screenwriter. Keep up the great work!