It rocks! You have captured so many images in so few words, and it's suitably cryptic in a really awesome sense!

Wow.

That's really good. You're very talented. I read and pictured it happening in my mind. That's a rare thing to find. Great job!

Kelli

Beautiful! Very touching. This part of the book always has me crying, even though I know what is to come. Thanks for sharing. And thanks for reviewing my stories! Reviews are how I find new authors to read. :)

I like this one as well. You are very good at this!

::sniffles and feels loved:: Thank you, Morwen! *_* Nice poem! I like! Tho.. Poor Gandalf! And on my birthday, too...

Coolness! I liked it; it had a panicked tone to it, like I would think he would have in the presence of the Balrog. Short but sweet. ) I also guess I was in a Gandalf fic sort of mood ('cause I just wrote the stupidest thing about him...ever )), so your little poem satisfied my reading "hunger" just perfectly. ) Keep up the good work!

This poem was written beautifully and artistically. Good job! Thank you 'inspiration fairy'. I have a black rider nazgul for a consionce. (grins) It's name is Joe. Say hi Joe!

Joe: SCRRREEEEEEAACHH! BAGGINSSSS... SHIRE

Shut up Joe. Anyway, nice poem! Hope you write more soon!