I've read this one a few times and love it, especially where Dom says that dating String is like having an exotic pet..he he. Any chance of finishing this one? :)

I wish that you would write some more on this story because I would like to see where you are going with it. It is very interesting so far.

When are you going to update this writing piece? It started off very good.

I have enjoyed the story, but need an update soon.

Nice to see the story continuing and a new solution to the bombing mystery. Dixon is an interesting choice of villain - I'd forgotten all about him (and he makes a nice change from John Bradford Horn:)). But I'm not quite sure why his revenge against Hawke would need to be any more complicated than simply blowing up Santini Air - why would he need to get involved with Bouchard? - unless there's more to his motive than simple payback. I'm looking forward to finding out.

Oh good chapter! Thanks for updating. Can't wait to see the plan and catch the bad guy!

Enjoyed the addition. Nicely done.

Oh nice - you're continuing this - can't wait for more.

I'm very glad you're continuing this. I sense more than just a fragment here. Love the title of the second chapter.

Wow...very steamy...but very good. XD Another interesting take on the Hawke/Cait relationship that *should* have been. XD Looking forward to seeing if you get any inspiration to take this further.

-Robert

Great fic. Like this take on what happened at the beginning of the 4th season.

Typical of Hawke that once he makes up his mind, he wants it to happen instantly also typical that he would listen to Cait's wishes. Their getting together was very sweet. It's great that Cait wants more than Hawke's usual MO when it comes to women and greater that Hawke seems to cherish what she means to him.