Pretty good! Write More!

for some reason I almost thought this was written by Farla. She is the writer of angsty pokemon fics. The Legend is a very interesting character. Write more on him soon!

Fascinating, most fascinating. Wonderful story. I have not personally seen "Mewtwo Returns", but this would appear to be a better followup. Wonderful chemistry and focus on Mewtwo; after all, this is a Mewtwo vastly different from the one we saw in "Mewtwo Strikes Back", a Mewtwo trying to redeem himself. Wonderful cameos by Jessie, James, and Meowth and the truth about the Legend. I hope you contributed more stories like this, my friend.

Good story!

Too subtle, not enough description. and very predictable. sorry

Er... Its ok i guess but i could ahve been better.

Good. Write some more, i want to see what happens.