| Reviews for Belonging |
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Janizary 8/30/11 . chapter 2Okay, I'm evil. Does the SR2 have landing gear? Peaches other than that ;) |
HellBovine 8/29/11 . chapter 2Tali seems to accept that it's really Shepard a bit too quickly for my tastes. Didn't even have any sort of test to prove that it wasn't a Cerberus clone. Otherwise good work. |
Para-Cord 8/29/11 . chapter 2Another great way to be so sweet in such a short period of time! You thought you messed it up? Never! All they needed was a small section to be with each other again as friends! Still lovin what you're doin! Keep it up! |
GoG ToXiC 8/29/11 . chapter 2Very touching. Looking forward to seeing what happens in your next story. |
StrikerXE 8/29/11 . chapter 2Sorry for not review the first chapter of this, my PC is kinda... dead... but well, here I am, and... wow, Shepard really has some hate for Cerberus, but well nevermind that. I don't know why you think you messed up the reunion, I think it was nice considering the length of it, being serious, when it comes to Freedom's Progress and Shepard/Tali, it could become in an EXTREMELY long chapter, you did great with just a section, so congratulations, and I'll look forward for the next part D |
DarkDanny 8/29/11 . chapter 2Oh John, still thicker than Wrex's skull I see. A damn fine finish. Again, subjecting us to a wait which is near unbearable, lol |
theluckyshot 8/26/11 . chapter 1Great to see you back. Can't wait for the next chapter. 300-709. |
Para-Cord 8/26/11 . chapter 1Another great story! I love all the emotions you can put into one short chapter! :) |
DarkDanny 8/26/11 . chapter 1I was wondering where you went! Seen a dozen new chapters and stories from you over the past few days, glad you haven't forgot this series! I really enjoyed the, as stated before, snapshots. It means we don't hav e to go through several more stores before we get to the prize of a reunion! and as for Nova's concerns. Nevermind them. Tali has been set up to keep her defenses up for two years straight. Seeing Shepard alive... She's going to have a Heroic BSOD and fall completely apart t the sight of him. Downside is that Now I have to wait for monday. Dammit! |
justanotherguy 8/26/11 . chapter 1 Very well done succession of snapshots. Had to wipe tears while reading this. |
Antique Nova 8/26/11 . chapter 1Sigh :) I was surprised that you did write much about her physically mourning Shepard. Do you think that she would breakdown at least once during the two years that she deals with his death? Part of me says yes, but part of me says no - even the toughest let there guard down momentarily if only for half a minute when no one is around before trying to shut out the emotions to become stronger. |
Suffering Soldier 8/26/11 . chapter 1Please don't leave it on this! It's killing me, tell me you're going to continue! |
The Allusive Man 8/26/11 . chapter 1This is really good. Mournful but not maudlin. I'm looking forward to the second chapter. |