I love it (sob)

*sniffle* That's so sad... It's a good story though. I hope the sequel is as good as this one.

Wow,I loved this fic!

You've done a great job!

Keep up the great work**

Sayonara,

**Chrystal**

ok... i cried 4 this story... and i think that's all i must say... great ffic! -

POOR LITTLE NANA-CHAN!

Oh my god, that was soooo sad. I nearly cried. The tears were forming in the corners of my eyes. It was *sniff* so *sniff* sadddd *starts crying so much that I end up sitting in a gondola with a packet of tissues and a box of chocs, just to stop me from crying*

I loved it. I don't know how, but you gotta do a sequel. You gotta, you must. I NEED A SEQUEL.

Call me when you do a sequel.

Emu: gAaaaaa that was so sad! But good mind you. Very nice writing style and job of portraying emotions but one thing. WILL YOU MAKE A SEQUEL? Please? PREETY PLEASE?

...T_T Tis over! No! T_T Poor poor Seventeen... he was just a little (uh, okie, a LOT) misguided for a while! I can't believe he ended it... :'( *o.o; that face looks scary* That was so so so sad. *cries* Anyway, this is a stupid review, but good fic Val. *gives thumbs up and blows nose*

! *Cries* THAT WAS SO SAD! WWWWWWWWAAAAAHHHHHH! POOR ANDROID 17! *Sniffles, sniffles, sniffles... cries* So sad.. *Sniffles* So sad.. *Sniffles* Such a good fic, too.. *Sniffles* There should be a warning on this thing for sensitive people like me! *Sniffles* Poor 17... anyway... Good fic.. sad.. but good fic.. /_\

Wow, this fic just keeps on getting better and better. In the last couple of chapters you made 17 to be quite nice,especially with Marron. Now he's the cold-hearted creep we all know and love.

Love the twist... love it to bits.

Your fic is... what's the word?

MAGNIFICENT!

I mean that too... your fic rocks.

YEAHHHHH!

BYE... UPLOAD SOON.

Bexi

Aww... tis so sad Val. T_T Seventeen went and killed Roshi and threatened to kill her family just cause he wanted his sister to be with him? Tis sweet in a scary maniac murder killer kinda way... T_T Anyhow, unexpected, and Bchan wants more, dammit, more! :)

Love it

Love it

Love it

Love it

Love it

Love it.

Can you tell that I really love your fic?

I just love the way you portrayed 17 charcter. He's not the cold-hearted b*****d that he is made out to be.

Thank you Val.

You have my regards.

Voici une belle petite review pour ma gentille grande soeur préféré. Elle est en français parce que mon anglais chit. Marron est trop cute (mais ça, ça fait deux ans que je le sais! WOW je sais de quoi), et C-17 ferait un trop bon papa! Tiens, pourquoi pas? J'ai tellement hâte aux prochains chapitres! (OUUUUUH LÈCHE CU À L'HORIZON!) Sauf s'ils décident de tous s'entre-tuer...

VALLLLLLLLLLL! It's so kawaii! "C-18 nearly killed Roshi. Once he had calmed her down, Krilin nearly killed his old sensei. Once he was also calmed down, Roshi almost killed himself." *snickers* Anyway.. KEEP TYPING SECOND PART AND NO SLEEP UNTIL IT'S DONE! Well.. actually, you can sleep. But I hope the second part is up soon!