|Reviews for Effect of Jealousy|
| damons-hot-as-hell 10/16/12 . chapter 8
damn i love it
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| Meel Jacques 5/1/12 . chapter 8
I loved the exchange of personalities.
This fanfic was really amazing.
Kisses ans Hugs,
| AraMetherlence 10/22/11 . chapter 8
i already read this story, for Jealousy and Effect of Jealousy...
You make me to think want happen next chapter and good job.
I feel sad for Wolfram character,because Yuuri even don't trust him and just i say i enjoy read...keep going ang good job...XD
| anon azure 10/20/11 . chapter 8
hahaha that was awesome!
| anonymous 9/14/11 . chapter 8
I love this fic and its prequel though it is a bit sad that I won't read wimpy wolfram again.
Nonethless, every fic you made on kkm, I will surely read. :D
| Yumi-chan Hamano 9/13/11 . chapter 8
This chapter was good! The story overall is AWESOME! I was kind of hoping for a chapter on the wedding but you can't always have want you want! I love it how they remember what happened during the week! Yuuri is still trying to deny his feelings for Wolfram! Oh well, he'll realize it soon! Probably after the wedding! Please update soon!
| nevynwatcher 9/13/11 . chapter 8
Great Job. Especially Yuri and Wolfram changing back when they were kissing. Very funny to imagine.
| steph 9/13/11 . chapter 8
It was a fun story, although the chapters 6 and 7 were too fluff for my taste, which fell like a fly in the ointment in a story meant to be funny first. And finally Yuuri finds himself compelled to marry, and that's what I feared. It is true that the customs of Mazoku are sufficiently bizarre that the one you've invented is credible, but there is "lack of consent" in a sense, because Yuuri was under the influence of the machine. It is true that the defect existed also for the commitment, but Yuuri could revoke it at any time and in any case, Celi endorse him on a whim and not seriously (you can see, it is she who suggests Elizabeth comes to the castle). All that to say that even Shinmakoku's customs are the physical manifestation of a will: without the will, the "slap of engagement" for example is a gesture worthless, or even kiss, and there this would make sense for everyone that there is no marriage, except for a Wolfram fulminating. The reverse still means that one does not care about the king's will! And so there is very little credibility.
In fact I think the end would be the most credible if Yuuri and Wolfram finally understand each other: with one hand that Yuuri realizes Wolfram insecurity about their relationship, and Wolfram's true love. And with second hand that Wolfram understands that Yuuri certainly feels something for him, but in any case he does not want to marry at 16! and therefore he would become more patient, and who knows, maybe they will become both more quiet, and thus the invention would not be a failure for once ... It's just my opinion, and it's just a story but maybe it's better than the eternal purpose in which they eventually marry: it's too conventional and it becomes tiresome, especially in the KKM fics as I am convinced (as many people for that matter) that Yuuri is not in love with Wolfram.
| Blood Masks 9/13/11 . chapter 8
Yay! It's finished, Congrats!
I hadn't noticed Günter is barely on the story untill I read your A/N hehehe, poor thing XD
| juzzchocola 9/12/11 . chapter 7
Yes, the story is getting interesting...
I'm eager to know what will happen when their personality return.
Will Yuuri jusk agrees to the marriage like that or you will write a few more chapters...
Can't wait for the next chapter
| Yumi-chan Hamano 9/12/11 . chapter 7
The chapter was really good! What's going to happen after they get their personality back? Is the marriage going to be postponed? Please update soon!
Ps. I hate writer block! That stand in the way of updating stories just like laziness!
| nevynwatcher 9/12/11 . chapter 7
Everything will be revealed the next day. I cant wait to see what happens.