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Reviews for: The War Begins
Lil DragonLex 12/4/11 . chapter 3
This was amazing. I love this story and how you made the arguments for everyone concerning the Justice League. Though there are a couple of things that I would disagree upon, the biggest one is Jason. Bruce did consider him a son and moved to officially adopt him. It would have been great to see something like a redemption for him or to work loosely with the Batclan. It is amazing how big they have gotten. I love that Bruce really did make himself such a huge family and you describing his relationship with everyone was brilliant. I really do adore this story.
XoreandoX 8/29/11 . chapter 3
Brilliantly written story, though there were a lot of things that happened here where it stretches out pretty far, but given how the DC Comics universe works, it kind of makes sense in its own way. So yeah, just wanted to compliment you on a well written story and on a successful design on a story based on Batman's involvement with the Justice League.
Fullmetal Knight 8/28/11 . chapter 3
Redemption for Jason? D: That's all I can ask. And would this war have anything to do with Batman Inc. or Outsiders?
Reishin Amara 8/28/11 . chapter 3
genius.i love this.keep up the good work.
Katsumara 8/27/11 . chapter 3
Caught this story in my review box and just had to check it out. Sorry about reviewing it through just Chapter 3 here, I may go back and drop reviews on the first couple chapters too, but I read through it all and just had to put my thoughts here, so :D

But .. I really loved your telling of the Titan-verse in your last story around Dick and Barbs, and the rest of the cast.. so the telling of the Bat-family here in this 'verse was just too cool. I've always loved the idea of a Bruce and Selena relationship, along with Dick and Barbs (even though those out there will fight hard for the Starfire thing after the show "Teen Titans"; Starfire's not really like that in the comics for sure), but yeah. It was really cool and touching to read.

Obviously the first couple of chapters were great for setup in the epilogue of sorts there at the end, but I just really love your storytelling. Really sorry about not jumping on the review when you first posted it up. I'm backlogged on some other reads I've got to go through.. but this is definitely one of my faves in terms of the Batverse/Teen Titans/comics in general. Keep up the great work, Ben!
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