The stupid thing wouldn't let me review your changes when I was logged in...:P

Anyways! I like it better from Ran's POV. It makes more sence why he is there and the others aren't and other things like that. *tumbs up* I just have one question...why haven't you finished it? It's so good. The characters are alive, the story line and plot seem good. Why stop. I think it's a good story. I like it alot! hummmm? Well what do you have to say for yourself, Peny?

Yay! a non-yaoi fic (It's so hard to find them)! What's going to happen? Please continue...

I'm begging!

ooooooo...it's getting exciting! What's going to happen next? What will Ran find out? Who and why sent in undercover? Well what are you reading this for? You should be writing...well get to it! I need to know what happens next. -

Intreging... a guilt trip... Beautiful woman... Dangerous mission... and to top it all off a glaring contest. What more could you ask for? I like your writing style. You totally got a good mood for your fic going. I love it so far continue. I just have one thing that confused me...who is the Boss you refure to?

This is really good! You should write more and post it soon 'cause i like it. A few suggestions: maybe you can proof-read it a little more closely before you post it, there were some spelling errors and if she could have cared less about the car, why describe it? it's really really great, though.

Yo! Excellent so far! Hahaha...poor Ran, he has really found someone that rivals his trademark death glare! Keep on writing!

Poor Ran, stuck with a temperamental tag-along on an important mission...*grins* This has lots of potential. I'm usually not a big fan of OC, but I want to hear more about anyone who can hold their own in a glaring contest with Ran! Write more soon!

Poor Ran... his death glare was countered by reason. What a shame... *snicker*- ah poor Ran he has such problems in life. hehe. So now that you have some one to drive poor Ran insane how will it go? next chapter NOW. i know where you live... WHAHAHAhahahahahahaha! erm.. now it was good write more