Omg, this is my life. I love the social commentary of this - THANK YOU for going there. It's so good to know other people are having the same thoughts. I didn't think blatant social commentary would work in a fanfiction, but you've convinced me that I was absolutely wrong.

I also love how the format is backwards - it makes the story more biting.

And just, wow. I'm speechless. Thanks!

MY GOD MY GOD MY GOD.

This is absolutely amazing. Everything was so perfect. And the last sentece - brilliant.

-a.

TTTT SAM, MY BABY.

But yeah. I miss him.

This is absolutely amazing. :) Good work.

your writing is like magic. i wish i could do this. i love that you went backwards, i feel like it makes what would have been a hopeful beginning a thousand times more tragic.

I can't decide whether i like your author's notes or the story more. (That is a compliment btw.)

YOUUUUUU break my heart. Into little slivers, that draw blood. Which is funny. I guess.